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It is the government's responsibility to protect the environment. What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement? Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: make an introduction (state the problem) - express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion express an opposing opinion and give l-2 reasons for this opposing opinion - explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position

It is the government's responsibility to protect the environment. What is your opinion? Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: make an introduction (state the problem) - express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion express an opposing opinion and give l-2 reasons for this opposing opinion - explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position g50Qa
The environment is the most important thing in the 21st century. Nowadays, people have to take care of nature because it impacts on everything, especially on the life expectancy. Governments should pay attention to the problem which can be caused by the contaminated environment. As far as I am concerned that states’ influence on nature is tremendous because citizens pay special fees that must help to keep it intact. For example, there are fewer issues contributed to the environment in Australia in case of feeling the responsibility. Furthermore, they have already reduced the total amount of emissions of carbon dioxide, and eventually, they will eradicate environmental problems. On the other hand, the majority believes that this issue is not dramatic and governments should better pay attention to other problems. People think in this way before they had not met the consequences of the damaged nature. Personally, I strongly object to this statement because I revealed that by the 2050s our world will be in starving and mostly flooded because of Global Warming which was triggered by environmental issues. There have already been some huge floods on the coasts of Japan and the USA and in case of that, some people have lost their homes. In conclusion, I strongly believe that to avoid harmful consequences governments have to pay more attention to pollution, otherwise global problems will appear.
The environment is the most
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thing in the 21st century. Nowadays,
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people
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have to
take care of nature
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because
it impacts on everything,
especially
on the life expectancy.
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Governments
should
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pay
attention to the problem which can
be caused
by the contaminated environment.

As far as I
am concerned
that states’ influence on nature is tremendous
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because
citizens
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pay
special fees that
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must
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help
to
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keep
it intact.
For example
, there are fewer issues contributed to the environment in Australia in case of feeling the responsibility.
Furthermore
, they have already
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reduced
the total amount of emissions of carbon dioxide, and
eventually
, they will eradicate environmental problems.

On the other hand
, the majority believes that this issue is not dramatic and
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governments
should better
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pay
attention to other problems.
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People
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think
in this way
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before
they had not met the consequences of the damaged nature.

Personally
, I
strongly
object to this statement
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because
I revealed that by the 2050s our world will be in starving and
mostly
flooded
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because
of Global Warming which
was triggered
by environmental issues. There have already been
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some
huge floods on the coasts of Japan and the USA and in case of that,
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some
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people
have lost their homes.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that to avoid harmful consequences
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governments
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have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pay
more attention to pollution,
otherwise
global problems will appear.

IELTS essay It is the government's responsibility to protect the environment. What is your opinion? Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: make an introduction (state the problem) - express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion express an opposing opinion and give l-2 reasons for this opposing opinion - explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position

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227 words
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