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It is the government's responsibility to protect the environment. What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement? Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: make an introduction (state the problem) - express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion express an opposing opinion and give l-2 reasons for this opposing opinion - explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position

It is the government's responsibility to protect the environment. What is your opinion? Write 200-250 words. Use the following plan: make an introduction (state the problem) - express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion express an opposing opinion and give l-2 reasons for this opposing opinion - explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion make a conclusion restating your position g50Qa

The environment is the most important thing in the 21st century. Nowadays, people have to take care of nature because it impacts on everything, especially on the life expectancy. Governments should pay attention to the problem which can be caused by the contaminated environment. As far as I am concerned that states’ influence on nature is tremendous because citizens pay special fees that must help to keep it intact. For example, there are fewer issues contributed to the environment in Australia in case of feeling the responsibility. Furthermore, they have already reduced the total amount of emissions of carbon dioxide, and eventually, they will eradicate environmental problems. On the other hand, the majority believes that this issue is not dramatic and governments should better pay attention to other problems. People think in this way before they had not met the consequences of the damaged nature. Personally, I strongly object to this statement because I revealed that by the 2050s our world will be in starving and mostly flooded because of Global Warming which was triggered by environmental issues. There have already been some huge floods on the coasts of Japan and the USA and in case of that, some people have lost their homes. In conclusion, I strongly believe that to avoid harmful consequences governments have to pay more attention to pollution, otherwise global problems will appear.

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important
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people
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have to
 take care of nature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it impacts on everything, especially
 on the life expectancy. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
Governments
 should You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitstipend
pay
 attention to the problem which can be caused
 by the contaminated environment.

As far as I am concerned
 that states’ influence on nature is tremendous This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 citizens You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitstipend
pay
 special fees that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it intact. For example
, there are fewer issues contributed to the environment in Australia in case of feeling the responsibility. Furthermore
, they have already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 the total amount of emissions of carbon dioxide, and eventually
, they will eradicate environmental problems.

On the other hand
, the majority believes that this issue is not dramatic and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 should better You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitstipend
pay
 attention to other problems. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 in this way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they had not met the consequences of the damaged nature.

Personally
, I strongly
 object to this statement This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I revealed that by the 2050s our world will be in starving and mostly
 flooded This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of Global Warming which was triggered
 by environmental issues. There have already been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 huge floods on the coasts of Japan and the USA and in case of that, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have lost their homes.

In conclusion
, I strongly
 believe that to avoid harmful consequences This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagefeereimbursementprofitstipend
pay
 more attention to pollution, otherwise
 global problems will appear. 