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is evident that government do allow use of animals for validating the medicines to be used on Humans. It is believed that instead of testing

It is evident that government do allow use of animals for validating the medicines to be used on Humans. It is believed that instead of testing the new medicines on humans it should be tested on animals. From my understanding of the situation, animals also have right to live and not to be caged for the testing purpose but still there are no strict rules in place for the wellbeing of animals. . To begin with, there is no guarantee that the medicines tested on animals will work for humans also. It can be the case that the medicine will backfire on humans. Secondly, ecological balance is effected as many animals are killed due to certain side effects of the medicines which are given to them. On top of it, cruelty is done to animals if they don’t voluntarily participate in the process. Thirdly, so much cost is spent on such laboratories which can be used to build other infrastructure. Lastly, poaching is practiced for some illegal research which leads to killing of endangered species. On the other hand, some research have been successful which includes cancer that was practiced firstly on animals. Secondly, poison related research which cure life taking disease are helpful and are evident in some circumstances. I would like to close this argument by saying that no research is so big that it will cost the life of anyone. Strict rules should be enforced to stop such illegal activities from happening in the future.
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animals
for validating the medicines to be
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used
on Humans. It
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instead
of testing the new medicines on humans it should be
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tested
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animals
. From my understanding of the situation,
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also
have right to
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live
and not to
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for the testing purpose
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still
there are no strict
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rules
in place for the wellbeing of
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animals
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with, there is no guarantee that the medicines
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tested
on
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animals
will work for humans
also
. It can be the case that the
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medicine
will backfire on humans.

Secondly
, ecological balance
is effected
as
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many
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animals
are killed
due to certain side effects of the medicines which are
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given
to them. On top of it, cruelty
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animals
if they don’t
voluntarily
participate in the process.
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much cost
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on such laboratories which can be
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used
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illegal
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which leads to killing of endangered species.

On the other hand
,
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some
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research
have been successful which includes cancer that
was practiced
firstly
on
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animals
.
Secondly
, poison related
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research
which cure life taking disease are helpful and are evident in
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some
circumstances.

I would like to close this argument by saying that no
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is
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that it will cost the life of anyone. Strict
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should
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stop
such illegal activities from happening in the future.
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IELTS essay is evident that government do allow use of animals for validating the medicines to be used on Humans. It is believed that instead of testing

Essay
  American English
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248 words
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