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The recent article on instructional videos published through the Internet has stirred heated controversies on whether or not it has high quality and credibility. While a lot of people are strongly against the idea that instructional videos are useful, I on the contrary as I believe it brings endless benefits to every netizen which may have been overlooked. First of all, YouTube is a renowned platform known for its mesmerizing as well as diversified instructional video resources. To YouTuber, those kind of videos are useful, which is an efficient way to address problems meet in their life. Just take me as an example, once I needed to apply the admission of university from their website but the process was complicated and I didn’t know how to finish it. Then I searched an instructional video and followed its instruction step by step and quickly completed my applying. However, if there was no assistance of that video, I may met many difficulties and spent much more time to solve it. Therefore, when us meet our unfamiliar fields, aren’t watching clearly instructional videos a great way for reference? Another reason why I support the idea that instructional videos are necessary is that it can prevent the security of people. Admittedly, some things, which need to use fire or electricity such as cooking, are dangerous. However, with the instruction as well as caution of those videos, people can learn how to employ that safely and avoid the dangerous actions. In contrast, if a person who do not clear the potential risk behind every action, the life of he or she may be threaten. Some platform like YouTube can entice both local or foreign video bloggers to public their instructional videos and utilize their professional knowledge to teach people the right way to do something. Therefore, those short videos are significant since it can save the life.
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IELTS essay instructional videos published through the Internet has stirred heated controversies on whether or not it has high quality and credibility

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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