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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these TV shows and books are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

TV dramas based on crime investigations are famous among general public. The reason drama lovers are getting interested in this genre is the suspense involves in it. The mystery of what will happen next is captivating to the audience. Drama based on book are too fun to watch as the popularity of the book series decides that the drama based upon it will be a celestial hit. It somehow draws attention and brings excitement. I believe to some extent that these dramas are a bit of exaggeration of the creator. Many of it is merely based on fiction and very hard to believe. Nevertheless it is a genre that are adored by vast majority of general public.

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dramas
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famous
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general public
. The reason You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaytheaterfarceshowsceneproduction
drama
 lovers are getting interested in this genre is the suspense involves in it. The mystery of what will happen next
 is captivating to the audience.

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watch
 as the popularity of the book series decides that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaytheaterfarceshowsceneproduction
drama
 based upon it will be a celestial hit. It somehow draws attention and brings excitement. I The usual collocation for “believe” is “in”, not “to”. Did you mean “believe in”?believe in
believe to
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some
 extent that these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaytheaterfarceshowsceneproduction
dramas
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 of it is merely
 based on fiction and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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hard
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 by vast majority of Consider using only “public” to avoid wordiness.public
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