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Global warming is a major concern for governments all around the world. What should we do?

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one of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that global warming is a major concern for government all around the world. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad of concerns in one's life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that global warming can not only contributes to one's life but also lead to numerious other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one is good stead, as far as agumenting their chance of prosperity and excellance is concerned. Anoter pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizen, thus learning such essential attributes dedication, responsibility and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of global warming. In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude the benefit of global warming are indeed too great to ignore.
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IELTS essay Global warming is a major concern for governments all around the world. What should we do?

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