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Both the passage and the lecture discuss whether a girl on a painting is Janes Austen or not.

Both the passage and the lecture discuss whether a girl on a painting is Janes Austen or not. E36nr
Both the passage and the lecture discuss whether a girl on a painting is Janes Austen or not. According to the author, the girl on the painting is Austen for some reasons. The lecturer, however, does not agree with the author`s point of view. The first reason the author says that, Austen`s family let portrait to be used in an edition of her letters, which means that her family accept that the girl on the painting is Jane. Hovewer, the lecturer disputes this idea. She says that family members did not see the portrait with their own eyes. According to the author, the girl on the portrait looks like Austen in the Austen`s sister, Cassandra`s drawing. The lecturer, on the other hand, says that the girl on the portrait can also be a relative of Austen. The speaker gives information about the experts that claim the girl on the portrait is actually a distant niece of Austen that resemles her. The author says that, the style of the portait indicates that a professional society portait painter did the painting when Austen was a teenager. That painter was active when Austen was as old as the girl in the painting. The speaker, though, says that it could be becuase of the style but, a stamp beyond the portrait shows that it was done by another painter. Actually, Austen was older than the girl on the painting at the time of the portait being made.
Both the passage and the lecture discuss whether a
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girl
on a
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painting
is
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Janes
Austen or not. According to the
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author
, the
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girl
on the
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painting
is Austen for
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some
reasons. The lecturer,
however
, does not
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agree
with the
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author`s
point of view.

The
first
reason the
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author
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says
that,
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Austen`s
family
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let
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portrait
to be
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used
in an edition of her letters, which means that her family accept that the
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girl
on the
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painting
is Jane.
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Hovewer
, the lecturer disputes this
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idea
. She
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says
that family members did not
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see
the
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portrait
with their
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own
eyes.

According to the
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author
, the
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girl
on the
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portrait
looks like Austen in the
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Austen`s
sister,
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Cassandra`s
drawing. The lecturer,
on the other hand
,
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says
that the
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girl
on the
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portrait
can
also
be a relative of Austen. The speaker gives information about the experts that claim the
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girl
on the
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portrait
is actually a distant niece of Austen that
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resemles
her.

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The
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author
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says
that, the style of the
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portait
indicates that a professional society
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portait
painter did the
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painting
when Austen was a
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teenager
. That painter was active when Austen was as
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old
as the
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girl
in the
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painting
. The speaker, though,
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says
that it could be
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becuase
of the style
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but
, a stamp beyond the
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portrait
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shows
that it
was done
by another painter. Actually, Austen was older than the
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girl
on the
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painting
at the time of the
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portait
being made
.
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IELTS essay Both the passage and the lecture discuss whether a girl on a painting is Janes Austen or not.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
243 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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