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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Y6rQ
As adults are very busy in their life doing specific job however it is necessary to know about their satisfaction on what they are doing and how to do they feel about it. The best possibility of an individual well being for their work is getting praised for their hardwork, dedication and punctualness. For instance, if a worker is very loyal, dedicated and regular at work than he/she can get good salary and even gets promotion to higher level. Sticking on company's every situation and proudly accepting whatever work is given will lead the individual to be the best employee. Getting bonus on certain events is also beneficial for an individual to be on a state of happiness. But sometimes it's like an imagination; not everybody gets fulfilment from their certain work. They don't get the expected salary on time as they also have to pay their rent, other expenses and so on. For example, even if a person is doing very well in his/her job but they do not get the praise that they deserve. So these factors lead them to leave their work and search for new job. In conclusion, getting the best working opportunity will contribute for an individual well-being. Even if workers do not feel happy in their work, different changes on working sector can be improved and new policies must be implemented so that everyone will get satisfaction from their job.
As adults are
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individual
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well being
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work
is getting praised for their
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hardwork
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punctualness
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very
loyal, dedicated and regular at
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than he/she can
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get
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good
salary and even
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promotion to higher level. Sticking on
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company
's every situation and
proudly
accepting whatever
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work
is
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given
will lead the
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individual
to be the best employee. Getting bonus on certain
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also
beneficial for an
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individual
to be on a state of happiness.
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sometimes
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from their certain
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well in his/her
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get
the praise that they deserve.
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these factors lead them to
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and search for new
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job
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In conclusion
, getting the best working opportunity will contribute for an
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individual
well-being. Even if workers do not feel happy in their
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work
,
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different
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changes
on working sector can be
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improved
and new policies
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must
be implemented
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so
that everyone will
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satisfaction from their
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job
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IELTS essay As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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