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The process on how to build a tepee.

The process on how to build a tepee. PRlrE

The diagram illustrates the process of constructing a tepee, which is typically called a tent. Overall, it involves eight essential stages, which begin with the three long sticks fastened together by a long rope and end with a ready-made tent. Firstly, tie the three long sticks together by a rope. Then, lift the pole by pulling the end of the rope to form a tripod. Next, add more wooden sticks and bind them together by wrapping the rope's end to strengthen the structure and increase stability. Besides that, the canvas is wrapped around the stick in the fifth stage. Then the wooden stick was lifted and tied to other wooden sticks. The canvas was untied onto the tent. In addition, several metal pins are used to attach the ends of the canvas tightly. Finally, the bottom of the tepee is fixed to the ground by using the bollards and the ropes. In the end, a tepee is successfully be built and ready to be used.

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 called a tent. Overall
, it involves eight essential stages, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with the three long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 fastened together by a long rope and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 with a ready-made tent.

Firstly
, tie the three long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 together by a rope. Then, lift the pole by pulling the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 of the rope to form a tripod. Next
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 more wooden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
 and bind them together by wrapping the rope's You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
 to strengthen the structure and increase stability.

Besides
 that, the canvas is wrapped
 around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
stick
 in the fifth stage. Then the wooden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
stick
was lifted
 and tied to other wooden You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwedgebatcanebarwandclub
sticks
. The canvas was untied
 onto the tent. In addition
, several metal pins are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to attach the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
ends
 of the canvas tightly
. Finally
, the bottom of the tepee is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 to the ground by using the bollards and the ropes.

In the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtopedgedeadlinetermpoint
end
, a tepee is successfully
be built
 and ready to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
. 