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The following diagram and table show the causes of land degradation globally and in specific regions. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following diagram and table show the causes of land degradation globally and in specific regions. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 1bVyn
The pie chart show the information about the percentage of 4 different categories which have negative impacts on land in over the world; while the table illustrates more specific with three distinct regions, including North America, Europe, as well as Oceania. At first glance, it is clear that there are a fair distribution for three main causes of global land degradation, expect for "other". Furthermore, Europe has the greatest proportion of land degraded. Looking at the details, over-grazing makes up with more than a third of land degradation, which is slightly higher than deforestation and over-cultivation, at 30% and 28% in turns. Numerous other factors account for just under a tenth, nowhere near as three given causes. Turning to the table, it becomes clear that 9, 8% and 7, 7% degradation of land is caused by deforestation and over-farming respectively, which are considerable greater than figure for two other areas. Meanwhile, Oceana is not affected by over-grazing, however, it stands at the highest place for over-grazing reason. Finally, the proportion of total land degraded appears highest in Europe (23%), then Oceania (13%) and finally North America (5%).
The pie chart
show
the information about the percentage of 4
different
categories which have
negative
impacts on
land
in over the world; while the table illustrates more specific with three distinct regions, including North America, Europe,
as well
as Oceania. At
first
glance, it is
clear
that there are a
fair
distribution for three main causes of global
land
degradation,
expect
for
"
other
"
.
Furthermore
, Europe has the greatest proportion of
land
degraded.

Looking at the
details
, over-grazing
makes
up with more than a third of
land
degradation, which is
slightly
higher than deforestation and over-cultivation, at 30% and 28% in turns. Numerous other factors account for
just
under a tenth, nowhere near as three
given
causes.

Turning to the table, it becomes
clear
that 9, 8% and 7, 7% degradation of
land
is caused
by deforestation and over-farming
respectively
, which are considerable greater than figure for two other areas. Meanwhile, Oceana is not
affected
by over-grazing,
however
, it stands at the highest place for over-grazing reason.
Finally
, the proportion of total
land
degraded appears highest in Europe (23%), then Oceania (13%) and
finally
North America (5%).
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IELTS academic The following diagram and table show the causes of land degradation globally and in specific regions. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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