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Number of tourists by season

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The number of tourists visit in the two cities of Dover and Troy are variety in different season. In Dover, the graph shows that the fewest number at 5, 000 in spring and the number increase gradually reaching at 25, 000 in fall. Finally, the number jump at 25, 000 in the region between fall and winter. In Troy, the fewest number of visitors is also at spring which is fewer than 5, 000 and climb significantly which reach the peak at 22, 500 in summer. The tourists decrease slightly in fall, but the number decline sharply to a low of 5, 000 in winter.

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 to a low of 5, 000 in winter. 