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Some people believe that universities should focus their money on academic studies. Other people believe that university should also use their funds to provide students with entertainments such as movies and concerts. What's your opinion and why? v.2

Some people believe that universities should focus their money on academic studies. Other people believe that university should also use their funds to provide students with entertainments such as movies and concerts. What's your opinion and why? v. 2
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS speaking Some people believe that universities should focus their money on academic studies. Other people believe that university should also use their funds to provide students with entertainments such as movies and concerts. What's your opinion and why? v. 2

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
0 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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