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Social networks like Facebook and MySpace have pictures and a lot of information about users on their home page. If you were a parent, what would be the appropriate age that you would allow your son/daughter to join a social network? Why?

Social networks like Facebook and MySpace have pictures and a lot of information about users on their home page. If you were a parent, what would be the appropriate age that you would allow your son/daughter to join a social network? Why? qVD35
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IELTS speaking Social networks like Facebook and MySpace have pictures and a lot of information about users on their home page. If you were a parent, what would be the appropriate age that you would allow your son/daughter to join a social network? Why?

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