Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To protect the health of young children, advertisement for candy and junk food shouldnot be shown on television. Use specific reasons and details in your response. v.655
To protect the health of young children, advertisement for candy and junk food shouldnot be shown on television. Use specific reasons and details in your response. v. 655
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS speaking To protect the health of young children, advertisement for candy and junk food shouldnot be shown on television. Use specific reasons and details in your response. v. 655
Speaking
American English
1 paragraphs
0 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes