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Describe a childhood song you remember well. v.1

Describe a childhood song you remember well. v. 1

Describe a childhood song you remember well. You should say: where you first heard this song how old were you then what it was about and explain how you feel now when you hear this song.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
Describe
 a childhood song you remember well
. You should say: where you first
 heard this song how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 were you thenPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
what it was about and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 how you feel This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 when you hear this song. 

1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a childhood song you remember well. v. 1

Speaking

American English

1 paragraphs

36 words

6.5

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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