Describe a childhood song you remember well. You should say: where you first heard this song how old were you then what it was about and explain how you feel now when you hear this song.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
Describe
a childhood song you remember
well
. You should say: where you
first
heard this song how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
were you then
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
what it was about and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
how you feel
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
when you hear this song.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
IELTS speaking Describe a childhood song you remember well. v. 1
Speaking
American English
1 paragraphs
36 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes