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257)It can now be argued that video games have surpassed television in terms of children taking time out of their days to play, sometimes playing hours at a time. How many hours a day is a sufficient amount of time for children to play video games? Why?

257)It can now be argued that video games have surpassed television in terms of children taking time out of their days to play, sometimes playing hours at a time. How many hours a day is a sufficient amount of time for children to play video games? Why? oRDV3
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IELTS speaking 257)It can now be argued that video games have surpassed television in terms of children taking time out of their days to play, sometimes playing hours at a time. How many hours a day is a sufficient amount of time for children to play video games? Why?

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