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178. Some say that, as long there are no financial difficulties, a woman's primary role should be to raise children and not work. Others disagree by saying that it is perfectly acceptable for a woman to have children and work at the same time. What v.2

178. Some say that, as long there are no financial difficulties, a woman's primary role should be to raise children and not work. Others disagree by saying that it is perfectly acceptable for a woman to have children and work at the same time. What v. 2
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS speaking 178. Some say that, as long there are no financial difficulties, a woman's primary role should be to raise children and not work. Others disagree by saying that it is perfectly acceptable for a woman to have children and work at the same time. What v. 2

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  American English
1 paragraphs
0 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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