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trilingual education system

The research topic on the impact of the trilingual education system is chosen because as a student of NIS schools I study in three languages. I have been learning some subjects in Russian since 7th grade, and I have noticed changes in the level of proficiency in three languages. Undoubtedly, my level of English has improved thanks to the three-language unity project. Therefore, I decided to research its influence on different aspects of life and the quality of education. The trilingual education system includes the study of three or more languages to increase the competitiveness of the state and improve the quality of education. Kazakhstan has introduced trilingualism to actively participate in the world’s growth process. The main purpose of the research is to determine the impacts of trilingual policy on the level of language proficiency of the population and identify problems caused by the implementation of the new education reform. The study will consider the following three main objectives: • reasons for the adoption of trilingualism in Kazakhstan; • difficulties and opportunities provided by a multilingual system; • influence of the new learning system on quality of education. As a first step towards the introduction of the new education system, Nazarbayev Intellectual Schools were built, which offer the opportunity to study subjects in 3 languages. But the language policy in Kazakhstan does not fully support the idea of trilingualism, as our NIS do. In most schools, pupils in Kazakh or Russian classes study all subjects in their native language. This is due to the fact that Russian language predominates in everyday life, since more than 96% of population can freely express their thoughts. Kazakh and Russian are considered the official languages in the country, and the use of English in public places is very low. In most cases, people who understand English are teenagers learning English or those who work in international organizations. Therefore, for the education of educated youth, it was decided to switch to trilingualism. I want to investigate the other implications of a program called the unity of three languages to see if this was a good or bad decision. The question is essential to be researched since the transition to a multilingual society is one of the goals of the Kazakhstani government. The research results can be useful to various educational institutions and people interested in studying the trilingual education system.
The
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topic on the impact of the trilingual
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education
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is chosen
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as a student of
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NIS
schools I
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in three
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languages
. I have been learning
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some
subjects in Russian since 7th grade, and I have noticed
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changes
in the level of proficiency in three
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languages
.
Undoubtedly
, my level of English has
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improved
thanks to the three-language unity project.
Therefore
, I decided to
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research
its influence on
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different
aspects of life and the quality of education.

The trilingual
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education
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system
includes the
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study
of three or more
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languages
to increase the competitiveness of the state and
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improve
the quality of
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education
. Kazakhstan has introduced
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trilingualism
to
actively
participate in the world’s growth process.

The main purpose of the
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research
is to determine the impacts of trilingual policy on the level of
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language
proficiency of the population and identify problems caused by the implementation of the new
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education
reform.

The
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study
will consider the following three main objectives:

• reasons for the adoption of
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trilingualism
in Kazakhstan;

• difficulties and opportunities provided by a multilingual system;

• influence of the new learning
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system
on quality of education.

As a
first
step towards the introduction of the new
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education
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system
,
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Nazarbayev
Intellectual Schools
were built
, which offer the opportunity to
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study
subjects in 3
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languages
.
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But
the
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language
policy in Kazakhstan does not
fully
support the
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idea
of
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trilingualism
, as our
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NIS
do. In most schools, pupils in Kazakh or Russian classes
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study
all subjects in their native
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language
.
This is due to the fact that
Russian
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language
predominates in everyday life, since more than 96% of population can
freely
express their thoughts. Kazakh and Russian
are considered
the official
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languages
in the country, and the
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use
of English in public places is
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very
low.
In most cases
,
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people
who understand English are
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teenagers
learning English or those who work in international organizations.
Therefore
, for the
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education
of educated youth, it
was decided
to switch to
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trilingualism
.

I want to investigate the other implications of a program called the unity of three
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languages
to
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see
if this was a
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good
or
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bad
decision. The question is essential to
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Kazakhstani
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government
. The
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results can be useful to various educational institutions and
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people
interested in studying the trilingual
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education
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system
.
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IELTS essay trilingual education system

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
393 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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