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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 2bap6

In this modern era, teenagers are like to meet their friends and peers group by online platform such as whats app, facebook and many more for spending leisure time instead of meet to each other. This essay asserts that the causes of this mentality and some measures to prevent this kind of mind set in this generation. Considering the reasons, first and foremost, teenagers like to meet people by sociallising because the travel time is decreased for go to one place to another. They think that they utilise these time for some activities. In addition to, some teenagers like to associate with new technologies. For instant, they know the all features of application and also try to learn how it is work and they teach to their friends by using video call or chatting. Last but not least, some teenagers are very introvert person. They are not able to talk in group. An example might be clearer that some teenagers tell to their friends in chatting but they afraid to talk to them face to face. However, the mentioned causes can be prevented by taking some preventive ways. To begin with, they should orgainise some camp and events. It helps to they meet eachother. For example, they should organise a sports event and anounce the winning price. So that most of the teenagers take participate in it. Also, they sholud organise get-to-gether on every weekend and go to some places where they can play some outdoor games as well as spend more time with each other. To conclude, some teenagers want to spend more time on social media and it is necessary to prevent this type of mindset because it is very important to know eachother.

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teenagers
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prevent
 this kind of mind set in this generation.

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teenagers
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meet
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people
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sociallising
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because
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time
is decreased
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think
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utilise
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time
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some
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some
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but
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some
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teenagers
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some
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teenagers
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tell
 to their friends in chatting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
You miss the verb here. You should rather write: "they're afraid".they're afraid
they afraid
 to talk to them face to face.

However
, the mentioned causes can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :precluded
prevented
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some
 preventive ways. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
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orgainise
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some
 camp and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 to they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
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eachother
. For example
, they should Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 a sports This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 and Possible spelling mistake found.announcean ounce
anounce
 the winning price. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthjuvenileyoungsterminor
teenagers
 take participate in it. Also
, they Possible spelling mistake found.should
sholud
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organise
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get-to-gether
 on every weekend and go to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places where they can play This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 outdoor games as well
 as spend more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 with each other.

To conclude
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withyouthjuvenileyoungsterminor
teenagers
 want to spend more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 on social media and it is necessary to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
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because
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very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to know Possible spelling mistake found.each other
eachother
. 