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In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “quackers”, which was unable to detect by sonar.

In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “quackers”, which was unable to detect by sonar. 7a0V5
In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “quackers”, which was unable to detect by sonar. The reading provides three theories about what might have created the odd sound. However, the professor counteracts by saying the author’s theories are still in debate and refuted each claim mentioned in the passage. First theory suggested by the reading is that the strange noise was actually the call of male and female Ocra whales during a courtship ritual. On the other hand, the lecture opposes by saying that t. . .
In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “
quackers
”, which was unable to detect by sonar. The reading provides three theories about what might have created the odd sound.
However
, the professor counteracts by saying the author’s theories are
still
in debate and refuted each claim mentioned in the passage.

First
theory suggested by the reading is that the strange noise was actually the call of male and female
Ocra
whales during a courtship ritual.
On the other hand
, the lecture opposes by saying that t.
.
.
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IELTS essay In this set of material, the reading and the lecture both talk about the strange noise heard by the Russian submarines called “quackers”, which was unable to detect by sonar.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
102 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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