The argument here states that the planning department of an investment firm should invest on Solario, a new manufacturer of solar-powered products. This argument fails to maintain several key factors on the basis of which it could be evaluated. To satisfy this conclusion, the author’s reasons that solar energy will soon become the most cost-effective and attractive than coal or oil as a source of electrical power. However, careful scrutiny of evidence reveals that it provides little justification to the author’s conclusion. Hence, the argument is considered incomplete or unsubstantiated.
First of all, the argument readily assumes that Costs have begun dropping for several types of equipment currently used to convert solar energy into electricity. This is merely and the assumption made without much solid ground. The argument does not mention the detail about the dropping rate. There can be a possibility that the cost of converting equipment is initially very high and still by dropping; its cost is higher than other electrical power. There is also a possibility that the cost is dropping only of low quality and brand equipment. However, the argument would have been better if it explicitly stated about dropping and recent cost of the solar-electricity converting equipment.
Secondly, the author argues here that some exciting new technologies for converting solar energy are now being researched and developed. This again is a weak analogy used by the argument and it does not demonstrate the clear correlation between development and research of new converting technologies and security of an investment. For instance, in many cases, it is found that many companies are pretending to lunch a new product to attract only a huge investment. The argument fails to explain the reliability and the rank of the company. It also fails to explain what sort of new technologies are under research and how those technologies will grow the profit of an investment.
Moreover, argument state that solar energy will soon become the most cost-effective and attractive than coal or oil as a source of electrical power. However, careful scrutiny of evidence reveals that it provides little support for the author’s statement in various critical aspects and raises skeptical questions. For example, what is the trend of the market of Solario’s product? Is the market solar-electricity converting equipment growing in recent years? Are there any interest groups who are seeking for a commission by making an investment on Solario? What will be the estimated payback period? Without the convincing answer to these questions, the reader is left with the impression that the author’s argument is more of a wishful thinking rather than substantive evidence.
In sum, the argument is unpersuasive as it stands. To bolster it further, the author must provide clear and more concrete information about the dropping rate of solar- electricity converting equipment and the comparison chart of the cost of this equipment to other technologies. The reliability of Solario and information about under developing technologies will help to strengthen the argument. The argument should also provide detail economic analysis to show strongly that why they have to invest in Solario.
The
argument
here states that the planning department of an
investment
firm should invest on
Solario
, a
new
manufacturer of solar-powered products. This
argument
fails to maintain several key factors on the basis of which it could
be evaluated
. To satisfy this conclusion, the
author’s
reasons that
solar
energy
will
soon
become the most cost-effective and
attractive
than coal or oil as a source of electrical power.
However
, careful scrutiny of evidence reveals that it
provides
little
justification to the
author’s
conclusion.
Hence
, the
argument
is considered
incomplete or unsubstantiated.
First of all
, the
argument
readily
assumes that
Costs
have begun dropping for several types of
equipment
currently
used
to convert
solar
energy
into electricity. This is
merely
and the assumption made without much solid ground. The
argument
does not mention the detail about the dropping rate. There can be a possibility that the
cost
of
converting
equipment
is
initially
very
high and
still
by dropping; its
cost
is higher than other electrical power. There is
also
a possibility that the
cost
is dropping
only
of low quality and brand
equipment
.
However
, the
argument
would have been better if it
explicitly
stated about dropping and recent
cost
of the solar-electricity
converting
equipment.
Secondly
, the
author
argues here that
some
exciting
new
technologies
for
converting
solar
energy
are
now
being researched
and developed. This again is a weak analogy
used
by the
argument
and it does not demonstrate the
clear
correlation between development and research of
new
converting
technologies
and security of an
investment
.
For instance
, in
many
cases, it
is found
that
many
companies
are pretending to lunch a
new
product to attract
only
a huge
investment
. The
argument
fails to
explain
the reliability and the rank of the
company
. It
also
fails to
explain
what sort of
new
technologies
are under research and how those
technologies
will grow the profit of an investment.
Moreover
,
argument
state that
solar
energy
will
soon
become the most cost-effective and
attractive
than coal or oil as a source of electrical power.
However
, careful scrutiny of evidence reveals that it
provides
little
support for the
author’s
statement in various critical aspects and raises skeptical questions.
For example
, what is the trend of the market of
Solario
’s product? Is the market solar-electricity
converting
equipment
growing in recent years? Are there any interest groups who are seeking for a commission by making an
investment
on
Solario
? What will be the estimated payback period? Without the convincing answer to these questions, the reader is
left
with the impression that the
author’s
argument
is more of a wishful thinking
rather
than substantive evidence.
In sum, the
argument
is unpersuasive as it stands. To bolster it
further
, the
author
must
provide
clear
and more concrete information about the dropping rate of
solar-
electricity
converting
equipment
and the comparison chart of the
cost
of this
equipment
to other
technologies
. The reliability of
Solario
and information about under developing
technologies
will
help
to strengthen the
argument
. The
argument
should
also
provide
detail economic analysis to
show
strongly
that why they
have to
invest in
Solario
.